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User_gary Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

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0I have been squatting on my doorway for three hours. Because I have lost my key and I should wait till my parents to come because she has one more key.02br
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")02font 02br 01font 00By the way, you used too much "because" here. Let's get rid of the 1st one, your short paragraph is ok without it. 05002br 02font 010id1

— Fleder_m@u_S

  • ")02font 02br 01font 00By the way, you used too much "because" here.
  • Let's get rid of the 1st one, your short paragraph is ok without it.
  • 05002br 02font 010id1
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0 01font00Hi User_gary,02br
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01i00I have been squatting on my doorway for three hours.02i00 I have lost my key and I should wait till my parents01del00 to02del00 come 01b00home02b01i00 because 01del00she has02del00 they have 02i00
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0I would use 'sitting on my doorstep' rather than 'squatting on my doorway'. 02br
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00I would say 'I have to wait until my parents come home' rather than 'I should'. Check the difference between until and till.02br
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00I would say 'they have another key' or 'a spare key' rather than 'one more key'.0-
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0 01font00Hi LRR, 05002br
00I think it's ok to use "till" here. I've tried checking and found no big difference in their usages.02br
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