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Here's one possible solution to your request.

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Please note, "that" in the first sentence is optional.

Obviously, there are many possible variations. You will likely get more.

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Another:

Request: taking days off on August 23 & 24.

Depends on how forceful you want to be.

Very polite and hopeful.

1) I would like to request August 23 and 24th as days off.

2) I would like to request the following days as vacation (days off): August 23 & 24.

More forceful.

3) With your approval, I will be taking August 23 and 24 as vacation (days off).

4) I will be taking August 23 and

Thank you.