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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Correct order of words in a sentence

I have 2 issues with the same sentence:

What is exactly the margin that provides an order?
This is a translation from a Dutch sentence.

Context:
Every order consists of several products. Each product has a margin. The total margin of all products in the order is called "order margin".
The real question is:
"how do you know the real/actual margin of an order"

To come back to my sentence:
- is exactly: is that a good description (and order)?
- margin that provides an order: I'm not happy with this part at all.
But, I'm not a native speaker so I can't really tell.

Your feedback is appreciated (it may also use different wording as long as the meaning is still there!

Best regards,
Uriel
  

Top answer

Anonymous Each product has a margin. What kind of margin are you talking about? Elaborate on the context please.

  • Anonymous Each product has a margin.
  • What kind of margin are you talking about?
  • Elaborate on the context please.
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AnonymousEach product has a margin.
What kind of margin are you talking about?
Elaborate on the context please.

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