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Perfect Stranger Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Correct or not no. 94

Dear All,

May I begin an email with these words?

I hope you won't mind that I'm sending this e-mail straight to you, but Tim has forwarded your reply to me and I thought I could directly ask one or two questions.

The situation is as follows: My co-worker has been in touch with a person from another workplace (where he will be working starting September) and he made some inquaries on my behalf regarding work opportunities. He has forwarded to me all messages he got and now I'd like to approach the HR person personally by sending her an email.

Would be grateful for your assistance.

Thanks!
  

Top answer

I hope you won't mind that I'm sending this e-mail straight to you, but Tim has forwarded your reply to me and I thought I could directly ask one or two questions. That sounds OK. I hope you don't mind that I'm sending you this e-mail, but Tim has forwarded your reply to me, and I thought I could ask one or two questions directly.

  • I hope you won't mind that I'm sending this e-mail straight to you, but Tim has forwarded your reply to me and I thought I could directly ask one or two questions.
  • That sounds OK.
  • I hope you don't mind that I'm sending you this e-mail, but Tim has forwarded your reply to me, and I thought I could ask one or two questions directly.
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Perfect StrangerMay I begin an email with these words?I hope you won't mind that I'm sending this e-mail straight to you, but Tim has forwarded your reply to me and I thought I could directly ask one or two questions.
That sounds OK.

I hope you don't mind that I'm sending you this e-mail, but Tim has forwarded your reply to me, and I thought I coul
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Thank you Mister M.

I've noticed that one of the changes proposed by you is the one where don't mind replaces won't mind. Does it mean that future tense here is incorrect?
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Perfect Stranger Does it mean that future tense here is incorrect?
It sounds less usual.

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