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Perfect Stranger Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Correct or not no. 10 (email English)

Dear All, can you correct my email? The highlighted parts are the ones I feel doubtful about.

Dear Lilly,

My plane arrives at 6.35 so the first possible train I could catch is at 12:36
Are you sure there are no earlier trains but after 8 o'clock?
If not, please book the ticket for me for 12.36
My full name: XYZ
My passport no: XYZ
Where am I supposed to pick up the ticket?

Thx,

Jimmy
  

Top answer

35 so the first possible train I could catch is at 12:36. Are you sure there are no earlier trains after 8 o'clock? 36.

— Mister Micawber

  • 35 so the first possible train I could catch is at 12:36.
  • Are you sure there are no earlier trains after 8 o'clock?
  • 36.
  • My full name: XYZ My passport no: XYZ Where am I supposed to pick up the ticket?
  • Thanks, Jimmy
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Dear Lily,

My plane arrives at 6.35 so the first possible train I could catch is at 12:36. Are you sure there are no earlier trains after 8 o'clock? If not, please book the ticket for me for 12.36.

My full name: XYZ
My passport no: XYZ

Where am I supposed to pick up the ticket?
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Thank you. Looks like not much had to be corrected.
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