Correct or not?
I wrote a paragraph about "tourism" and ended it with the following sentences:
A word still remains : tourism is greatly beneficial to everyone living in this country. To conclude, I would like to point out that what I have just written about tourism is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean!
Is this conclusion correct?
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Omar Ahmed Is this conclusion correct? It's a clever remark about what you have written, and it's grammatically correct if that's what you're asking about, but it's not really a conclusion. The previous sentence contains the conclusion: Tourism is greatly beneficial to everyone living in this country .
- Omar Ahmed Is this conclusion correct?
- It's a clever remark about what you have written, and it's grammatically correct if that's what you're asking about, but it's not really a conclusion.
- The previous sentence contains the conclusion: Tourism is greatly beneficial to everyone living in this country .
- If this is to be a somewhat informal account of tourism in your country, then I'd say it's OK to add these kinds of comments, but if it's supposed to be a more formal presentation, then unfortunately you'll have to leave it out, although you may be able to incorporate the same basic idea somewhere near the beginning of your presentation.
- CJ
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Omar AhmedIs this conclusion correct?
It's a clever remark about what you have written, and it's grammatically correct if that's what you're asking about, but it's not really a conclusion. The previous sentence contains the conclusion: Tourism is greatly beneficial to everyone living in this country.
If this is to be a somewhat informal accoun
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