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Omar Ahmed Posted 4 years ago
Grammar

Correct or not?

Our teacher asked us to write a paragraph about the role of young people in the society.

My friend started the paragraph in the following way:

I want to write in this paragraph about young people. Young people are the nerve of the nation. ......

I don't think it is correct to say "write in this paragraph about..." The second sentence also sounds odd to me. Am I right?

  

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Young people are the nerve of the nation. " Yes, you are right <<<<<<<<< The second sentence also sounds odd to me. Am I right?

— Clive

  • Young people are the nerve of the nation.
  • " Yes, you are right <<<<<<<<< The second sentence also sounds odd to me.
  • Am I right?
  • It's not bad, as long as he tells us what this means, Clive
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I want to write in this paragraph about young people.Young people are the nerve of the nation. ......

I don't think it is correct to say "write in this paragraph about..."

Yes, you are right <<<<<<<<<

The second sentence also sounds odd to me. Am I right? It's not bad, as long as he tells us what this means,

Clive

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Omar AhmedI don't think it is correct to say "write in this paragraph about..."

The grammar is correct, but the idea is wrong.

A good paragraph never starts with a mention of the fact that the author is writing a paragraph! Likewise, a good story doesn't start with "I am going to write a story", and a good essay doesn't start with "This is an essay w

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