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Quangay Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

correct or incorrect to use 'hence'

Could someone please check my sentence to see if it is correct: "I would like to ask for permission to go to American, hence I would stay with my sister and her family so that I can look after her and her baby in her pretty hard times."
  

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'Hence' is wrong there. I would like to ask for permission to go to America in order to stay with my sister and her family so that I can look after her and her baby while they are going through some hard times.

  • 'Hence' is wrong there.
  • I would like to ask for permission to go to America in order to stay with my sister and her family so that I can look after her and her baby while they are going through some hard times.
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'Hence' is wrong there.

I would like to ask for permission to go to America in order to stay with my sister and her family so that I can look after her and her baby while they are going through some hard times.
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Thanks a lot for your help Mister Micawber.

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