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TSHILL Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

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I thought after back from Dublin i will try to go Delhi to meet you for an week. But now i am feeling hopeless to knowing that you will not available in that time. Please send me again your proper schedule .
  

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There are many grammatical errors. First, the pronoun "I" always always always must be capitalized. "after back from Dublin" does not make sense.

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  • There are many grammatical errors.
  • First, the pronoun "I" always always always must be capitalized.
  • "after back from Dublin" does not make sense.
  • "go Delhi" is incorrect.
  • "hopeless to knowing" is incorrect.
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There are many grammatical errors. First, the pronoun "I" always always always must be capitalized.
"after back from Dublin" does not make sense.
"go Delhi" is incorrect.
"hopeless to knowing" is incorrect.
"you will not available" is incorrect.

Please try again, and someone will fix the remaining issues.
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I thought after come back from Dublin to go to Delhi to meet you for an week. But now I am feeling hopeless to know that you are not available in that time. Please send me again your proper schedule.
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Here are some suggestions:

I thought that after coming back from Dublin I would go to Delhi to meet you for a week. But now I am feeling hopeless to knowing that you are not available during that time. Please send me again your proper schedule again.
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Would you explain me why did you use `would' here?
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Because it is a future possible plan that you were thinking about.
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Emotion: smile thank you very much
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Sorry . Thank you
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