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The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports, by country, in millions.

Television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions.
Country	Tennis	Golf	Motor racting	Athletics	Total
Australia	6.2	4.5	3.7	3	17.4
UK	6.6	2.8	6.4	4.5	20.3
USA	7	11.2	1.5	5.5	25.2
Canada	6.1	3.4	1.1	3.9	14.5
Total	25.9	21.9	12.7	16.9

The table shows viewers from four countries watching different types of sports. There are millions people from Australia, UK, USA, Canada watching various activities. The various activities include tennis, golf, motor racing, athletics.

In general, Americans enjoy sports the most, British, Australians, Canadians respectively. Tennis is very popular, 25.9 million viewers in four countries, especially Americans has 7 million people watching tennis. Americans also love golf when 11.2 million resident watching golf while the total of three other countries only 10.7 million. The biggest difference in the number of people like watching sports when it came to motor racing. Not only 6.4 million UK people but also 3.7 Australia people million love motor racing. However, 1-1.5 people in Canada and USA like motor racing. Athletics has the stable number of viewers, each country about 3-6 million people watch it.

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The table shows the numbers of viewers from four countries watching different types of sports on television. There are millions people (ungrammatical) from Australia, UK, USA, Canada watching ~~various activities. The various activities include~~ tennis, golf, motor racing, and athletics.

In general, Americans enjoy sports the most, (You cannot make that conclusion from the data. It is a false inference. Do you know why? Do not write conclusions or opinions in Task 1. ) British, Australians, Canadians respectively. Tennis is very popular, 25.9 million viewers in four countries, especially Americans (Americans are people. ) has 7 million people watching tennis. Americans also love golf when 11.2 million resident (wrong form) watching golf while the total of the three other countries is only 10.7 million. The biggest difference in the number of people like watching sports (ungrammatical. Where is the relative pronoun?) when it came wrong verb form) to motor racing. Not only 6.4 million UK people but also 3.7 Australia people million love (wrong word) motor racing. However, 1-1.5 people in Canada and USA like motor racing. Athletics has the stable (wrong word) number of viewers, each country (ungrammatical ) about 3-6 million people watch it.

Example essay: (This is too long, with over 240 words, but it gives you some ideas of just writing about the data.)

Paragraph 1: Describe the table.

The table gives the number of people in each of four countries (Australia, the UK, the USA and Canada) who watch various sporting events on television. The sports listed are tennis, golf, athletics and motor racing. In addition the table includes the sums by country and the sums for each sport.

Paragraph 2: Write about 2 or 3 significant observations:

Overall, the USA has the largest number of viewers, followed by the UK, Australia and Canada. There are about 77 million viewers across all four countries and all four sports. The sport having the most viewers is tennis, followed by golf, athletics and motor racing. There are twice as many people watching tennis as motor racing.

Paragraph 3: Write about some interesting details.

The ranking of the particular sport within each country in terms of number of viewers varied. In the USA, golf was watched more than the other sports, with 11.2 million viewers, with tennis coming in second at 7 million. Tennis had the most viewers in Australia, Canada and the UK, but none of them surpassed the US in numbers. They had between 6.1 and 6.6. million each. Nearly half of all the people who watched golf were in the USA. Although motor racing had the fewest total viewers among the four countries (12.7 million), it ranked second in the UK, (6.4 million), which accounted for half of the total. The smallest number in the table was 1.1 million, which represented the Canadians watching motor racing. Motor racing also ranked last in the USA with 1.5 million. That was about one seventh of the number of Americans who watched golf.

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