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Creativeguru Posted 17 years ago
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Our tv news journalism is still in a nascent stage, be it Hindi or English News channels. None of the channels can match the professional standards of international news channels like BBC or CNN. The moral responsibility of the news journalism is to inform people, but in India its to inflict fears in the minds of people, take any recent major event like 26 terrorist attack, the figures for total numbers of terrorists, the victims all varies for different channels. Upon that they proudly brake from the top of the roof that we are the first to break this false story. They are innocuously insensitive to victim’s family emotions, but devotedly sensitive to their trp rating.
  

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Our Hindi and English News journalism is still in its infancy. None of the channels can yet match the professional standards of the BBC or CNN. The moral responsibility of the journalist is to inform people, but in India journalism is used to instill fear in people's minds .

  • Our Hindi and English News journalism is still in its infancy.
  • None of the channels can yet match the professional standards of the BBC or CNN.
  • The moral responsibility of the journalist is to inform people, but in India journalism is used to instill fear in people's minds .
  • Take any recent major event like the November 26th terrorist attack : the total number of terrorists and victims varies with the channels .
  • They proudly announce from the top of the roof that they are the first to break their false story.
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Our Hindi and English News journalism is still in its infancy. None of the channels can yet match the professional standards of the BBC or CNN. The moral responsibility of the journalist is to inform people, but in India journalism is used to instill fear in people's minds. Take any recent major event like the November 26th terrorist attac

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