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My Essay:

The given schemes illustrate the process in which instant noodles are manufactured.

As is evident from the diagram, there are 3 main phases, which commence with flour storage, followed by processing noodles, and end with labeling and sealing complete products.

To begin with, flour, which is a fundamental material to make noodles, is transferred into storage silos to be kept in good condition. In the next step, the stored flour together with oil and water are put into a mixer to create dough sheets. By mean of rollers, this substance pass through a machine which cuts it into dough strips at the fourth stage. In the following operation, dough strips are converted into noodle discs which are then cooked in oil and dried.

The seventh step involves putting dried noodles into separate cups and adding vegetables and spices to them. Finally, labels are added to cups which are sealed after that to finish the manufacturing process.

P/s: Can you give me the band I can achieve with this essay. Thank you