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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Correct my writing please

Any grammatical errors?

We were walking until Tesco came into sight. Then we found a chest on our way to Tesco so we opened it a thin plume of smoke drifted into our eyes. We teared and were flummoxed.

Is it okay to use the word "flummox" instead of bewilder, confuse in that context?

  

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Informally, yes. However, you need a full stop (period) after 'it', and the last sentence should be 'Our eyes teared up and we were flummoxed'.

— Rover_KE

  • Informally, yes.
  • However, you need a full stop (period) after 'it', and the last sentence should be 'Our eyes teared up and we were flummoxed'.
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Informally, yes.

However, you need a full stop (period) after 'it', and the last sentence should be 'Our eyes teared up and we were flummoxed'.

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