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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Can anyone please correct something I have written and I am not sure about if it's ok or not.
Thank you very much.
The text is:
"Sometimes I am more inclined to think over the question you raise rather than analyse the photograph itself. And this one reached the very inside of me. It's Amazing.
That was a beautiful question. I would like to leave behind the essence of a generous, beautiful heart. I want my legacy to be one that all of the people who have been around me are proud of such humilty I was able to touch them with".
Can anyone please correct something I have written and I am not sure about if it's ok or not.
Thank you very much.
The text is:
"Sometimes I am more inclined to think over the question you raise rather than analyse the photograph itself. And this one reached the very inside of me. It's Amazing.
That was a beautiful question. I would like to leave behind the essence of a generous, beautiful heart. I want my legacy to be one that all of the people who have been around me are proud of such humilty I was able to touch them with".
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"Sometimes I am more inclined to think over the question you raise rather than analyse the photograph itself. And this one reached the very inside of me. It's Amazing. OK
That was a beautiful question. I would like to leave behind the essence of a generous, beautiful heart. I want my legacy to be one that all of the people who have been around me are proud of such humilty I was
That was a beautiful question. I would like to leave behind the essence of a generous, beautiful heart. I want my legacy to be one that all of the people who have been around me are proud of such humilty I was
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