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Correct my text please !!! :'(

I'm not very good in english (it's not my language ...) and i really need help for this text. I hope someone can help me. thanks

Two broken hearts is better than one …

I was with a nice guy since more than one year (yes it’s a lot!) everybody saw us like the perfect couple. I loved him, he loved me … yeah … It was what I was thinking … One day he dump me for an older girl. It was the first time I got my heart broken. But the story doesn’t finish here! It’s only the beginning!

After a couple of days (ok I admit … of weeks) my pain disappears and I almost forgot him (we weren’t anymore in the same school). But he didn’t forget me … his relation with the other girl last one month … and he started to call me after school and he said to my best friend that he have feelings for me … To bad for him… When you broke my heart, I broke your.
  

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> Two broken hearts are better than one. ). Everybody saw us as the perfect couple.

  • > Two broken hearts are better than one.
  • ).
  • Everybody saw us as the perfect couple.
  • It was what I was thinking.
  • One day he dumped me for an older girl.
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Two broken hearts are better than one.

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