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Celiaks Posted 9 years ago
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Correct my text about : Do you prefer experiences over things

Answering this question at this age will push me to think deeper about the question, but I bet that at the age of 10 or 9 I wouldn't even try to understand what you meant by things, if you offered me a walk in the park, you would make ma the happiest child even more if it would be with friends of my age. But now some people say that that material would bring happiness,by meterial I mean clothes, phones, computers, cars, houses, boats etc.

For me the most important thing when making a choice is happiness, I don't care if a material is just plastic or if an experience needs a lot of effort, I would definitely be tempted to bay a car if I don't have one rather then travel, but in the other hand if I had to choose between a more fancy car and an experience I would prefer the experience. So in general I prioritize something that will make my life easier, but when it about just a fancy or superficial object, I prefer to enjoy life and in this case having experience is what will make me very happy.

  

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I have highlighted the text that has mistakes. Who is "you" in your story? ) the happiest child even more if it would be with friends of my age.

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  • Who is "you" in your story?
  • ) the happiest child even more if it would be with friends of my age.
  • But now some people say that that material ( cloth?
  • ) would bring happines s,b y meterial (Material is cloth.
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I have highlighted the text that has mistakes. Who is "you" in your story?



Answering this question at this age (what age?) will push me to think deeper about the question, but I bet that at the age of 10 or 9 (Are you 9 or 10?) I wouldn't even try to understand what you meant by things, if you offered me a w

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