correct my sentences, "urgent please"

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My friend added me as a friend in a Yahoo Messenger. So a request came to me whether to accept it or deny it. But I did not respond him either by clicking on "Accept" or "deny" button. So my friend got angry and he replied to me "Do you have no time to click on the "Accept" button on the request box" a few days later?

Could anyone tweak my sentences? or else give me better version for the same.

Philip · Accepted Answer

User_gary
My friend added me as a friend in a Yahoo Messenger. So a request came to me whether to accept it or deny it. But I did not respond him either by clicking on "Accept" or "deny" button. So my friend got angry and he replied to me "Do you have no time to click on the "Accept" button on the request box" a few days later?

Could anyone tweak my sentences? or else give me better version for the same.

But I didn't respond by clicking either the "accept" or "deny" button. [Always try to keep 'either...or' in parallel structure. Wrong: you either can have milk or soda. Right: you can have either milk or soda.]

I would put "a few days later" after "so".

No need to repeat the subject in this sentence, even though it is expressed differently.

User_gary · Answer

Thank you friend.

Do you have any other words for the "request box"?

Actually I want a word for "a small page/window which you see sometimes to click "Yes" or "No" or something"?

correct my sentences, "urgent please"

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