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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Correct my sentence please?

Correct my sentence please?

As a patient, if you no longer feel anything about a patient dies, you should no longer be a nurse.

Thank you so much
  

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As a patient, if you no longer feel anything about a patient dies, you should no longer be a nurse. Did you write that sentence as you intended to?

  • As a patient, if you no longer feel anything about a patient dies, you should no longer be a nurse.
  • Did you write that sentence as you intended to?
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As a patient, if you no longer feel anything about a patient dies, you should no longer be a nurse.
Did you write that sentence as you intended to?
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I mean : As a nurse....
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Anonymous.....I mean 'As a nurse....
As a nurse, if you no longer feel anything (about a patient's death)(when a patient dies), you should no longer be a nurse.

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