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Shravanmm Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Correct my sentence please.

Dear teachers,
Correct the below sentences grammatically and please do correct it it is not sounding natural.

1. A year ago I was out of station and I had lost my purse. I had to starve the whole day and that day I realized the value of money ever since I have been using money only for needed things.

Thank you.
  

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A year ago I left the station, and I had lost my purse. I had to starve the whole day , and that day I realized the value of money . Ever since , I have been using my money only for necessities.

  • A year ago I left the station, and I had lost my purse.
  • I had to starve the whole day , and that day I realized the value of money .
  • Ever since , I have been using my money only for necessities.
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A year ago I left the station, and I had lost my purse. I had to starve the whole day, and that day I realized the value of money. Ever since, I have been using my money only for necessities.

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