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SunnyShiny Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Correct my sentence please

hello everyone, i just joined to this group i don't know if i should write my question here or not! but plase correct my sentence

" THE MOST USAGE WAS DEVOTED TO TELEVISION AND FREZZER RESPECTIVELY, 98 AND 80 PERSENT THROUGH OUT THE YEARS BEFORE VACUM CLEANER HAS MORE UTILIZATION OF REFREGERATOR"

thanks in adnave,
sanaz
  

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Hello, Sanaz, and welcome to English Forums. Please do not post in all capital letters; it is very difficult to edit. TELEVISIONs AND FREezERs were the most-used appliances, at 98% AND 80% respectively, THROUGHOUT THE YEARS BEFORE the VACuUM CLEANER appeared.

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  • Hello, Sanaz, and welcome to English Forums.
  • Please do not post in all capital letters; it is very difficult to edit.
  • TELEVISIONs AND FREezERs were the most-used appliances, at 98% AND 80% respectively, THROUGHOUT THE YEARS BEFORE the VACuUM CLEANER appeared.
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Hello, Sanaz, and welcome to English Forums. Please do not post in all capital letters; it is very difficult to edit.

TELEVISIONs AND FREezERs were the most-used appliances, at 98% AND 80% respectively, THROUGHOUT THE YEARS BEFORE the VACuUM CLEANER appeared.
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thanks alot for your helpEmotion: smile
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Hi Sanaz, and welcome!

I would like to help you with your sentence, but I'm not sure what it means. Emotion: crying

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i really thank you... i am teaching english but i didn't know what my student mean by that!!!!! you helped me alot Emotion: smile
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I would like to tell my friends that I was very busy past two weeks.

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