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Arypriaga Posted 17 years ago
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Correct my sentence, please...

The annual meeting of shareholders on January, 21st 2009 decided Mr.XYZ as a new Berhard CEO replaced Mr. OPQ..The election processes has done formally and involved all of Berhard's stakeholders. Different from Mr. OPQ, Mr. XYZ is internal employee. He have many experiencies especially in a banking field. He is hoped able to increase both Berhard's profitability and assets. He also is encouraged to reduce operational cost that raise up to one hundred percent in the last two years.
  

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Hi. XYZ as a new Berhard CEO, who replaced Mr. OPQ.

— Fandorin

  • Hi.
  • XYZ as a new Berhard CEO, who replaced Mr.
  • OPQ.
  • The election process has been done formally and involved all of Berhard's stakeholders.
  • As opposed to Different from Mr.
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arypriaga The annual meeting of the shareholders on January, 21st 2009 approved Mr.XYZ as a new Berhard CEO,who replaced Mr. OPQ. The election process has been done formally and involved all of Berhard's stakeholders. As opposed to Different from Mr. OPQ, Mr. XYZ is an internal employee. He has a lot of ex
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