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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Correct my sentence

when butterfly eggs hatch, they eat the leaves of plants and become a nuisance to man

is it right???
  

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Hi, It's incorrect, because it does not start with a capital letter and end with a period. Clive

  • Hi, It's incorrect, because it does not start with a capital letter and end with a period.
  • Clive
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Hi,

It's incorrect, because it does not start with a capital letter and end with a period.

Clive
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Since neither the butterflies nor the eggs eat the leaves, I would replace "they" with "the caterpillars."

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