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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Correct my sentence

After did the photos set the stadard, both they and called attention to the desperate needs of the poor rural areas.
  

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I'm sorry, but this sentence is incorrect in a way that makes it difficult to discern what the writer is attempting to convey. My best guess is it should be: The photos set the standard and called attention to the desperate needs of poor rural areas. "

  • I'm sorry, but this sentence is incorrect in a way that makes it difficult to discern what the writer is attempting to convey.
  • My best guess is it should be: The photos set the standard and called attention to the desperate needs of poor rural areas.
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I'm sorry, but this sentence is incorrect in a way that makes it difficult to discern what the writer is attempting to convey.

My best guess is it should be:

The photos set the standard and called attention to the desperate needs of poor rural areas.

For example, one might say of Walker Evans' iconic photographs of persons during the Great Depression of the 1930s, "His
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Hi,

After did the photos set the stadard, both they and called attention to the desperate needs of the poor rural areas

Sorry, I don't understand the underlined part. You need to try to say it some other way.



Clive

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