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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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From not long ago, it was happening in the neighborhood a series of robberies of homes and cars too.
The people of the neighborhood feel scared and insecurity and disturbing specially for the passage of a long period, the police could not arrest them; we were hear from time to time a new stealing in neighborhood.
On April 8, my brother and I were in the house Which is still a 7-year old. At home alone and my mother and father they went to visit their friend Outside the city.
When it become 11 I was sleeping and my brother too , than I wake up
Because I felt thirst, While I was walking to the kitchen I heard voices in the living room So I run quickly to the phone and called the police . To tell them about a thief in my house. Than I went quickly to the bed room were my brother sleep than I locked the door and we waite the police .
after 10 Minutes they came and Confining the house from all directions Than the thief had been arrested, He was the same thief who stole houses in the neighborhood all this time...
In next mooring the people who live in neighborhood thanks me and Appreciate what I done and the police give me Medal for my courage.
The people of the neighborhood feel scared and insecurity and disturbing specially for the passage of a long period, the police could not arrest them; we were hear from time to time a new stealing in neighborhood.
On April 8, my brother and I were in the house Which is still a 7-year old. At home alone and my mother and father they went to visit their friend Outside the city.
When it become 11 I was sleeping and my brother too , than I wake up
Because I felt thirst, While I was walking to the kitchen I heard voices in the living room So I run quickly to the phone and called the police . To tell them about a thief in my house. Than I went quickly to the bed room were my brother sleep than I locked the door and we waite the police .
after 10 Minutes they came and Confining the house from all directions Than the thief had been arrested, He was the same thief who stole houses in the neighborhood all this time...
In next mooring the people who live in neighborhood thanks me and Appreciate what I done and the police give me Medal for my courage.
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Hi, Not long ago, a series of robberies of homes and cars was happening in our neighborhood. People felt scared, insecure and disturbed for a long period. The police could not arrest anyone.
- Hi, Not long ago, a series of robberies of homes and cars was happening in our neighborhood.
- People felt scared, insecure and disturbed for a long period.
- The police could not arrest anyone.
- We heard from time to time about a new robbery.
- On April 8, my 7-year-old brother and I were at home alone.
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Hi,
Not long ago, a series of robberies of homes and cars was happening in our neighborhood. People felt scared, insecure and disturbed for a long period. The police could not arrest anyone. We heard from time to time about a new robbery.
On April 8, my 7-year-old brother and I were at home alone. Our mother and father had gone to visit their friend outside the city. A
Not long ago, a series of robberies of homes and cars was happening in our neighborhood. People felt scared, insecure and disturbed for a long period. The police could not arrest anyone. We heard from time to time about a new robbery.
On April 8, my 7-year-old brother and I were at home alone. Our mother and father had gone to visit their friend outside the city. A
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