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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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correct my paragraph

of all the lovely seasons,
its autumn Mom holds dear,
bright colors splashed on every tree,
and days so cool and clear,
leaves without haste dance to the ground,
an autunmal waltz that makes no sound,
as my mothers air, i must agree,
the leaves are a special sine,
like the explosion of a huge paint bom,
a unique seasonal desine.
  

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Of all the lovely seasons, It's autumn Mom holds dear, Bright colors splashed on every tree, And days so cool and clear, Leaves without haste dance to the ground, An autumnal waltz that makes no sound, As my mothers heir, I must agree, The leaves are a special sign, Like the explosion of a huge paint bomb, A unique seasonal design.

— Blue Jay

  • Of all the lovely seasons, It's autumn Mom holds dear, Bright colors splashed on every tree, And days so cool and clear, Leaves without haste dance to the ground, An autumnal waltz that makes no sound, As my mothers heir, I must agree, The leaves are a special sign, Like the explosion of a huge paint bomb, A unique seasonal design.
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Of all the lovely seasons,
It's autumn Mom holds dear,
Bright colors splashed on every tree,
And days so cool and clear,
Leaves without haste dance to the ground,
An autumnal waltz that makes no sound,
As my mothers heir, I must agree,
The leaves are a special sign,
Like the explosion of a huge paint bomb,
A unique seasonal design.
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