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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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correct my paragraph

Once upon a time, I just had made it back to my homeland. While I was there I saw a couple of animals in the forest, I saw a lynx and a coyote. I build a totem pole in front of my house, it was
small Lodge.
  

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Several years ago I went back to my home country. While I was there I saw a couple of animals in the forest, a lynx and a coyote. I build a totem pole in front of my house, which was a small lodge.

  • Several years ago I went back to my home country.
  • While I was there I saw a couple of animals in the forest, a lynx and a coyote.
  • I build a totem pole in front of my house, which was a small lodge.
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Several years ago I went back to my home country. While I was there I saw a couple of animals in the forest, a lynx and a coyote. I build a totem pole in front of my house, which was a small lodge.

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