I would make the following changes to correct and clarify your paragraph (boldface are my changes, cross-outs are deleted original language): There were incorrect and omitted entries found in the issue book that would have resulted in differences in the Warehouse. We show ed the errors to Jane and Michelle , which they rechecked and confirmed the entries, and the book was subsequently adjusted with the correct figures. The errors did not affect the salespersons ' books because it was the entries were posted accurately to those records.
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