Correct my motivation Letter

Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Master of Science in Petroleum Engineering program major of Reservoir Management for the academic year 2015/2016, in which I am enormously interested. The degree from one of the most prestigious, elitist and respected universities is my chance to enrich my knowledge and professionally outgrowth thereby contribute to the development of the petroleum engineering sector.
I am a recent petroleum engineer graduate, who’s currently a trainee at Wintershall company Libya branch. I believe that the knowledge I shall be receive from M.Sc. in Petroleum Engineering program at your university will help me to develop myself to become a professional reservoir engineer and be able to convey the new technology I will be learning, especially in the area of EOR methods and apply it to improve and develop Libya as well as Wintershall oil and gas production.
For that, I am sincerely hoping to be given the opportunity to study at Tu Clausthal University the perfect learning environment, under the supervising of the global well-known expertise that every day I will be learning a lot from.
I also know that Germany is the perfect destination for Master studies as it’s the third most popular destination among international students and German master’s degrees are highly respected by employers worldwide.
I strongly believe that my educational background and deep concern in this field of study make me a very good candidate for this program. During my bachelor studies I took some training courses with Shlumberger Company, such as Merak Peep fundamentals and Oil Field Manager (OFM) fundamentals. For my graduation project I have developed a very sophisticated economic model to study the feasibility of shale gas resources in Libya and planed for future strategies to overcome all the environmental and technical challenges that come along with such projects. In addition to that the training period I spent with Wintershall Company in the development department was very helpful to me and allowed me to gain valuable and practical knowledge.
In conclusion, I would like to say that I am eager to gain new experiences, improve my skills and broaden my understanding of Petroleum Engineering science, and I am convinced that studying the M.Sc. in Petroleum Engineering program would contribute to my development as a specialist Reservoir Engineer of international level in the best possible way and will provide me the opportunity for further studies towards a Ph.D.
Thank you very much for considering my application.
Yours faithfully,