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Forlan Posted 17 years ago
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Correct my long sentence

Hi,

Is below sentence right?

I hate the bank officer who called my house phone and asked whether my brother had paid credit card bill.

He called the credit card manager to ask about the payment but the manager said that the term of credit is so.
  

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Hi, Is below sentence right? I hate the bank officer who called my house phone and asked whether my brother had paid credit card bill. I hate the bank officer who called my house phone and asked whether my brother had paid his credit card bill.

— Clive

  • Hi, Is below sentence right?
  • I hate the bank officer who called my house phone and asked whether my brother had paid credit card bill.
  • I hate the bank officer who called my house phone and asked whether my brother had paid his credit card bill.
  • He called the credit card manager to ask about the payment but the manager said that the term of credit is so.
  • He called the credit card manager to ask about the payment , but the manager said that the term of credit is so those were the terms of credit.
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Hi,

Is below sentence right?

I hate the bank officer who called my house phone and asked whether my brother had paid credit card bill.

I hate the bank officer who called my house phone and asked whether my brother had paid his credit card bill.

He called the credit card manager to ask about the payment but the manager said that the term of credit is s
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