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Guest Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Correct my letter, please. I need it for today it is very important
I need to write a letter and I am not sure about it.
"Thank you very much for your help and attention.
My students are sending some cards and little gifts for the students of ...(school's name).
They loved the cardas and the creative box.
My name is .... and I have taught English in this school since last year. I teach in another
public school, too. I told my students there what I was doing here and they were very interesting to receive letter from ... (school's name), too. The cards that they wrote are in the same box of ...(school's name). This box is at school. When you come back to Brazil, please, take it here.
I would be grateful for the opportunity of this contact between our students.
Yours sincerely,
"Thank you very much for your help and attention.
My students are sending some cards and little gifts for the students of ...(school's name).
They loved the cardas and the creative box.
My name is .... and I have taught English in this school since last year. I teach in another
public school, too. I told my students there what I was doing here and they were very interesting to receive letter from ... (school's name), too. The cards that they wrote are in the same box of ...(school's name). This box is at school. When you come back to Brazil, please, take it here.
I would be grateful for the opportunity of this contact between our students.
Yours sincerely,
Top answer
Thank you very much for your help and attention. (school's name). They loved the cards and the creative box.
- Thank you very much for your help and attention.
- (school's name).
- They loved the cards and the creative box.
- My name is ....
- and I have been teaching English in this school since last year; I also teach in another public school.
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Thank you very much for your help and attention.
My students are sending some cards and little gifts for the students of ...(school's name). They loved the cards and the creative box. My name is .... and I have been teaching English in this school since last year; I also teach in another public school. I explained to my students there what I have been doing here, and they are very int
My students are sending some cards and little gifts for the students of ...(school's name). They loved the cards and the creative box. My name is .... and I have been teaching English in this school since last year; I also teach in another public school. I explained to my students there what I have been doing here, and they are very int
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Hi Mister Micawber,
Will you please take a look at my letter also.as Moutainhiker seems busy.
http://www.EnglishForward.com/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=61491
Thanks
Will you please take a look at my letter also.as Moutainhiker seems busy.
http://www.EnglishForward.com/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=61491
Thanks
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Mister Micawber,
thanks for your help.
.. take it here... I thing it is wrong. I would like to say that the box is at school and he can
come to pick up it when he come back to Brazil.
I have problems when I need write letters.
thanks for your help.
.. take it here... I thing it is wrong. I would like to say that the box is at school and he can
come to pick up it when he come back to Brazil.
I have problems when I need write letters.
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OK:
'This box is at our school, and when you come back to Brazil, you can pick it up.'
'This box is at our school, and when you come back to Brazil, you can pick it up.'
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Mister Micawber,
Thanks for your help.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
During my next holidays I will ask you some doubts that I have about Past Perfect and
Conditionals.
I really have problems with Past Perfect. I am Brazilian and this tense there isn't in Portuguese.
I love English very much and I would like to improve it, because I want to be a good tea
Thanks for your help.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
During my next holidays I will ask you some doubts that I have about Past Perfect and
Conditionals.
I really have problems with Past Perfect. I am Brazilian and this tense there isn't in Portuguese.
I love English very much and I would like to improve it, because I want to be a good tea
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