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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
Letter Writing

Correct my letter please

''Dear Editor,

I want to report about a shoplifting happened in our town. First of all, it must be said that the shoplifting happened by a group of children for several time. So, I think we should do something towards this bad habit. such as, teach them to not be afraid of asking for help whenever they need. Finally, shoplifting is a serious problem that should be stopped as fast as possible.

Yours truly ''


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Please I need you to show me my mistakes in my letter, and thank you very much <3

  

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anonymous I want to report about a shoplifting happened I want to report a shoplifting incident anonymous First of all, it must be said that the shoplifting happened by a group of children for several time . First of all, it must be said that the shoplifting was committed by a group of children. The meaning of the red part is unclear.

— Anonymous

  • anonymous I want to report about a shoplifting happened I want to report a shoplifting incident anonymous First of all, it must be said that the shoplifting happened by a group of children for several time .
  • First of all, it must be said that the shoplifting was committed by a group of children.
  • The meaning of the red part is unclear.
  • You should explain it.
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anonymousI want to report about a shoplifting happened

I want to report a shoplifting incident

anonymousFirst of all, it must be said that the shoplifting happened by a group of children
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