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Correct my letter

Helloo! i dont know if my email is wright and formal, i need someone to correct me.

Subject: Emailing to discuss undergraduate program in business

Dear Sir/Madam

My name is Khaled Fazlur Rahman. I’m Bangladeshi, I study in Oman in Sohar University. This semester I’ll graduated with diploma in accounting.

I want to continue Bachelor in University Canada west. I do not know what kind of documents the university needs, how to apply, and if there is any equivalency.

I have searched a lot and I loved the university. It is what I always dreamt of, it would be my pleasure to study in your university.

Sincerely,

Khaled Fazlur Rahman

  

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Hel lo ! I don 't know if my email is wright appropriate and formal, so I need someone to help me correct it. me.

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  • I don 't know if my email is wright appropriate and formal, so I need someone to help me correct it.
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  • Subject: Emailing to discuss undergraduate progra ms in business Dear Sir/Mada m, My name is Khaled Fazlur Rahman.
  • I am Bangladeshi, and I am currently study ing in Oman in at Sohar University.
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Hello! I don't know if my email is wright appropriate and formal, so I need someone to help me

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