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Dear forum visitors,I find this forum very useful for my IELTS preparation. My special thanks go to nona the brit whose valuable advices will, for sure, have a positive impact on my letter writing.I hope this help will continue. With this in mind, I am now posting a new letter for you to correct.(I’ve got some unfinished letters as a result of my home exercises. I can’t complete them because every letter has a point where I’d just run out of ideas.)This task goes like - Complain about poor hotel service and accommodation, ask for reimbursement. Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing to express my concern about the level of service and accommodation at your hotel.We decided on your resort facilities after we had read an advertisement in 'Sunday Times' on May 12th. It described picturesquely beautiful amenities that were available such as clean beaches, efficient room service, and decent accomodation.Unfortunately, your hotel failed to live up to the advertisement promises. On arrival, the accommodation had not been cleaned, the refrigerator was not working and there was no hot water.It was supposed to be quiet but, in fact, it was rather noisy. Spacious rooms seemed rather small and with insufficient air condition.The clean beaches turned out to be wasted with aluminium cans and plastic bags.Brrrrrrrr – terrible, isn’t it? I want action over this disaster. How could I express it in my letter?(Please, correct grammar if possible.)Thanks.

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

Hi all,
Hopelessly sinking down the forum posts.
Do you mind if I bump it up one more time?

Thank you.

Dmitrij.

Nona the brit · Answer

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my concern about the level of service and accommodation at your hotel.
We decided on your resort facilities after we had read an advertisement in the 'Sunday Times' on May 12th. It described the wonderful amenities that were available such as clean beaches, efficient room service, and decent accomodation.
Unfortunately, your hotel failed to live up to the advertisement promises.
On arrival, our room had not been cleaned, the refrigerator was not working and there was no hot water.
It was supposed to be quiet but, in fact, it was rather noisy. The advertised 'spacious' room seemed rather small and had insufficient air conditioning.The clean beaches turned out to be littered with aluminium cans and plastic bags.

Don't forget to ask for your money back!

Reeltime · Answer

Sandra Gavlik

Please review this drafted letter for poor grammar usage and needed correction.Deborah helped myself and my wife in the listing of our home for sale in 2005 and, also, was the real estate agent for my sister-in-law with the purchase of her home. We have known Deborah for at least 8 years now and consider her as one of the most professional and "caring" individuals we have had the privilege of knowing. Our real estate needs were always met with correct answers and positive guidance through some of the most trying circumstances. Should the need ever arise again we would call on Deborah Tyhurst to represent us in our real estate transactions. Working with Deborah is a distinct pleasure knowing that all details, large and small, will be handled in the most effective manner. It's my honor to recommend Deborah to those who require competent and professional (and caring) real estate representation

Anonymous · Answer

With love, passion and liveliness, this booklet is forthrightly dedicated to the indigenous Indian and the oppressed people in the Americas who suffer the ferocious condition of injustice, whose life continues to recklessly be tormented. Profound recognition along with those who struggle with all forms of discrimination, regardless of race, color or ethnic group. Conjointly, I hold in high regard to my wife and friends who encouraged me to keep up with the thought, made this manuscript achievable, hoping times, will eventually change the color of the fad leaves into green someday. Giving in to read this transcript, I hope may encourage the reader to investigate further, to have a better understanding and respectively, judging to assess the need for a better world to live. Outlining these solemn words, extract reasonable amount of energy, times and courage to shed some light in this micro hereditary acreage. The abuse, excessive exploitation, wreaked havoc incited by wicked occupiers on planet earth, might eventually lead to irreversible catastrophic dilemmas. The indicated had already given signs of current and unpredictable disastrous occurrences, costing lives and suffering, to which creatures living on this globe are constantly being exposed to. Human race not only failing to protect the earth for their survival, but also creating causeless conflicts among various ethnic groups, merely to take possession of natural resources that are not inherited from their territories, mysteriously being possessed by these despotic intruders. Deriving out of this merciless behavior, inspired me as a responsible person, genuinely touch by these conflicting infringements, I then decided to draft this message in order for concern persons and hereby, appealing to compassionate and voiceless citizens whose planet earth is also the home we are all sharing.

Banana green 44 · Answer

Dear Sir,

In 2019, Abbott Germany has announced Alinity training period from 01^st April to 12^th April (12 days), we authorized Hamza to attend, Hamza training will be beneficial for both Ainjee and Abbott, since he would be able to work more efficiently after training. In this connection, I would like to request you that his last visited to Germany in 2016, Abbott was taken his hotel costs, while remaining expenses were payed by Ainjee, we need same favour in April training from Abbott to take up the Hotel cost and remaining expenses will pay by Ainjee.

I shall be grateful for your consideration our request.

Park build 700 · Answer

This is to inform you that on 22/1/2021, 950 litres of diesel was delivered to the residence from the diesel storage tank at EEAS compound , which was delivered last year during the Covid-19 Lock down which has not been used.

For this purpose, your payment will be paid to the account section. And a receipt will be issued to claim your refund.

Finally, the price of diesel delivered is based on the current market price on January 22nd. Thanks

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