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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Correct my grammar please.Ignore the name and gender of the characters,I changed it on porpuse.

Mike(melodies) vs Miko(I'm sure)
I'm just making fun of some funny situations.Don't take this seriously,okey?

Those of you who knows about lbt's Savina Concert this year,you might have seen the ''I'm sure'' performance with Shela and Miko.Before the kid on the grass performance, Mike and Lika sang the 'kid on the grass' 'which is my favorite song by the way.Then miko and shela walk together from the back center of the stage,miko exiting from the stage is holding her Mic ready to throw it on mike,my thoughts may be true sometimes.
The Mikali couple shared the same mic at the begining,I never heard the song before,So I don't really know what's coming.shela start singing the sexy lines then
from the center of the stage ,they walked on the side and I notice they have a connected dress,'weird' I thought .That stage lift as I watch shela touching miko's chin who's on his knees by the way,the light effect is awesome, they sang the chorus I can't move my eyes away from my screen as I watch shela on top of mike.
I can't even believe what my eyes are seeing ,I never expect it as a love song,I thought two songs is enough
And the part where they dance with the music is just the most awesome part except shela's confused moves.That was the most important event of my life as a fan girl and Shela ruined it by forgetting the choreo of the dancing part.
So after that,mike is JEALOUS.From my crazy mind she thought ''Me and shela has been together for five years,kissing and groping in public(and private),people even made fanvideos about our unrequited love for each other with our epic couple name Mishel still how can't the staff see that I should be the one with shela in this song? I can't let miko on top of my girl again.''
Haha,want a revenge mike?
mike is obviously happy about the coming savina contest.Since it's a contest,they are given a chance to choose what they want to sing,I don't know who decide the song between mike and shela,yes..they performed the ken by Slabs.
From my crazy mind Yuko thought ''Haha,shela was maybe on top of mikeo on that 'kid on the grass'' performance but I'll be kissing shela in this song,watch the original video of ken...see?there is a kissing at the end,I'm obviously getting that from my shelan!I'm 51883%,just watch mike!
Then mike start blogging about the coming perf.
Even though she had swollen gums,that would never stop her ,this will be the only chance where she can harass Haruna with the managements support.
Okey,so after they sang the song,mike did the most awaited and important event of his life,to kissed shela in public and declared their love to each other at least that's what she thought.So she goes on with the kiss and bam!...got smacked down by mike.Lol,poor mike,now I think he's back to wishing that he's the one who performed with haruna in the I'm sure perf instead of Mariko.Lucky zombie.
  
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