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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Correct my grammar please.

With one quick move she sat on his chest, a gold cross fell out her top. He felt his strength ebb away.
  

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Hi, With one quick move she sat on his chest, a gold cross fell out her top. He felt his strength ebb away. With one quick move, she sat on his chest.

— Clive

  • Hi, With one quick move she sat on his chest, a gold cross fell out her top.
  • He felt his strength ebb away.
  • With one quick move, she sat on his chest.
  • A gold cross fell out of her top.
  • He felt his strength ebb away.
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Hi,
With one quick move she sat on his chest, a gold cross fell out her top. He felt his strength ebb away.
With one quick move, she sat on his chest. A gold cross fell out of her top. He felt his strength ebb away.

Best wishes, Clive
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