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Makam.sreekanth Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Correct My grammar. :-O
Friends, Iam very poor in grammar. Please correct me..
"LOVE" is a four lettered word on which the whole world stands. With out love the whole world is useless. In this world, you can find the love every where.
Always beleave in people who scolds you in front and correct you rather than the people who lifts you in front and criticize at back. To get a person who really loves you is very difficult. I call a person is luckiest in this world when he have some body, who loves him. In front of their love nothing in this world can meet.
In love there will be no artificial smiles, money, business, loss. There will be allways one curve on you face. The person in love will not smile with his mouth, but with his eyes. That says the love from his heart. There is nothing in this world called good love or bad love.
Try to Love others to get someone to love you.
"LOVE" is a four lettered word on which the whole world stands. With out love the whole world is useless. In this world, you can find the love every where.
Always beleave in people who scolds you in front and correct you rather than the people who lifts you in front and criticize at back. To get a person who really loves you is very difficult. I call a person is luckiest in this world when he have some body, who loves him. In front of their love nothing in this world can meet.
In love there will be no artificial smiles, money, business, loss. There will be allways one curve on you face. The person in love will not smile with his mouth, but with his eyes. That says the love from his heart. There is nothing in this world called good love or bad love.
Try to Love others to get someone to love you.
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s. Rather than correcting your grammar myself, I have pointed out some places where it needs changing, as you may prefer to try it for yourself. Let me know if you don't understand my comments!
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- Rather than correcting your grammar myself, I have pointed out some places where it needs changing, as you may prefer to try it for yourself.
- Let me know if you don't understand my comments!
- ] 'stands' is not quite the right word here; try 'depends'.
- With out love] without the whole world is useless.
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Hello m.s.
Rather than correcting your grammar myself, I have pointed out some places where it needs changing, as you may prefer to try it for yourself. Let me know if you don't understand my comments!
Love is a four-lettered word] > four-letter word
on which the whole world stands.] 'stands' is not quite the right word here; try 'depends'.
With out
Rather than correcting your grammar myself, I have pointed out some places where it needs changing, as you may prefer to try it for yourself. Let me know if you don't understand my comments!
Love is a four-lettered word] > four-letter word
on which the whole world stands.] 'stands' is not quite the right word here; try 'depends'.
With out
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LOVE is not just a four-lettered word, but it's the mainstay for whole life. The life will be
futile With out love.You can find Love in the whole universe.
Always believe in shrew who allways scolds in front of you and correct you right there, rather than the people who criticize behind the back. It's very
LOVE is not just a four-lettered word, but it's the mainstay for whole life. The life will be
futile With out love.You can find Love in the whole universe.
Always believe in shrew who allways scolds in front of you and correct you right there, rather than the people who criticize behind the back. It's very
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Hello m/s
Try this:
LOVE is not just a four-letter word, but the mainstay of your whole life. Your life will be futile without love. You can find Love throughout the universe.
Always trust someone who criticises you to your face and corrects you there and then, rather than the person who criticises you behind your back. It's hard to find a person who reall
Try this:
LOVE is not just a four-letter word, but the mainstay of your whole life. Your life will be futile without love. You can find Love throughout the universe.
Always trust someone who criticises you to your face and corrects you there and then, rather than the person who criticises you behind your back. It's hard to find a person who reall
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