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Mumi-girl Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Correct my grammar in 1 sentance please

Hi,

Can you please corret my grammr in this sentance:

Children and adolescents can sit every day in front of the television and consume the one commercial after the other one about food which is rich on fat and sugar.
  

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mumi-girl Hi, Can you please corret my grammr in this sentance: Children and adolescents can sit every day in front of the television and consume the one commercial after the other one another about food that is rich in fat and sugar.

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  • mumi-girl Hi, Can you please corret my grammr in this sentance: Children and adolescents can sit every day in front of the television and consume the one commercial after the other one another about food that is rich in fat and sugar.
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mumi-girlHi,

Can you please corret my grammr in this sentance:

Children and adolescents can sit every day in front of the television and consume the one commercial after the other one another about food that is rich in fat and sugar.


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Children and adolescents can sit in front of the television every day and watch one commercial after another about food which is rich in fat and sugar.

CJ
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