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The Life of My Brother



I know life become harder and harder each day. Every one of us had experienced the hardship and struggling in life. In my life time I never forgot my brother had sacrificed his life for us. It been almost nine years but I never forgot the day he dropped out the school. After my dad passed away he decided to drop out of school just to help my mom with our expenses of daily life. In the , June is the month of the children goes back to school. Before the school started he, my younger sister, and me went to school to register the classes. Suddenly he said to me that he will stop of schooling because he wanted my sibling and I go to the good school. So he needs to help my mom for the tuition to pay for us in school. In the you need to pay the tuition for your schooling, it doesn’t matter it elementary or high school but you need to pay before go to school. It not like in here it free. After I heard that I was shocked and speechless. I can see the tear from his eyes are going to rolling down. I can felt how his feel. I know it really hard to him to choose that, but I don’t know what to do to comfort him.



I felt that I’m useless because I didn’t doing anything good to him. Every time I see him I feel guilty because he has sacrificed most of his valuables thing in life just to sent his sibling to the good school. I know it hard to give up our education but he don’t have any choose. I always said to myself why he has been in tragic life, why our family had too many problems to overcome? I been asking those question to myself again and again when I’m sad. When he dropped out of school he take my mom to go to work everyday. Since my mom don’t know how drive so she need him for that. Sometimes he took us to school and picked us after school too. He always reminder three of us to be good in school’s so that we will have a good life in the future. When my dad passed away he became the head of the household. I know that the responsibility is so tough, but he handle it pretty well.



He is really important to me because he help me a lot in life. He taught me how to respect and to be a good girl to my mom. He taught me how to myself and independent. He such a great brother to me and is kindhearted to everyone too. He treads everyone like his brother. My mom always said to us to be good to him and respect him. She said without him I can’t go to school. Yeah I agreed what my mom had said. I have been thankful that I had a good brother like him. Thanks to him that I know my knowledge in school. I think without him I will literally. Even now he not live with us but I still love him and missed him when he still with us. He always was asking me about my general life. I know it really hard to speak it out to thanks the entire thing he had done for us but I know one day I will speak that word out loud. I really appreciate all of the kindness and sacrifice that he has given to us. I’m so proud that I have a kind brother like him.