Correct my esssay

I am 20 years old and writing a reflective paper like this
one. I planned to go college right after high school, but life does not always
happen according to plan. In this paper I will present a description of m life experience
that I am the woman I am today. These experiences using adult development theories
from this class. I will also look ahead to the goals I wanted to accomplish in
the future.

I grew up with my military dad. My dad had enlisted in the
navy. My dad graduated from high school,
and my mother quite high school, and they meet in the ninth grade. My mom
always tells me my dad as never scared to date her, even though she was wild.
My mom love to stay up at night and dad love to stay up in the morning. My
choose night jobs at the high school cleaning up. My dad work in day.

My earliest childhood memories were of growing up with my
grandmother garden, Talladega Al, as the youngest of four children. As the
family grew, my mother left quite her job my father went to a prison to work.
My siblings and I are about two years apart in age; my childhood was fairly
ordinary until I got older to stay with my father and stepmother in Georgia. My
brother planned to join us there, but he wanted to stay in Georgia.

When I finally left for Talladega, I was excited at the
opportunity to go out of state. My most memory is going with my school to Camp
Cosby. I got sick and I stayed in the cabin. My exciting trip came up turning
out to be very short lived. After we had been in California for a good little
minute. M y oldest brothers went to school.
We all gather in a family room and it was time for a divorce. I cried, no.
My mother and her four kids abraded on a plan back to Alabama. I waved good bye
to my father. I was so sad!

My mom and her kids settle in a small country town and just
wonder why we didn’t have anything in our house. Life for a single mother with four children
was rough. She found a good paying job at the chicken plant. We had to get food
stamps in order to eat.

We ate hot dogs and pork beans often, but my mother was very
funny.

Since I was elven year old, and my siblings were older, so
we could not get jobs to help support the family. So about a year we work in
granny after school. We also got our school lunches free under a program for
needy children. When I grew older, I was babysitting. O Sunday mom made sure we
knew the bible. She always says if you
know things are hard always pray to the heaven father.

When I was in high school, I worked after school babysitting.
I made a decent amount every day. I had all the children

n in the neighborhood. I planned to attended college when I
graduate from high school while in high school I meet this handsome man name
Jerome. As time went by we had a son name Zaylen.

In our studies adult development theory, I was interested to learn about the infants
and toddlers (birth–2 years of age), parents or caregivers are the most
important influences. They are responsible for every aspect of care, safety,
and comfort during a time when humans are forming their first impressions of
the world. Because parents or caregivers are so important, the quality
(including quantity of time spent) of the relationship has a heavy influence on
early childhood development (FAMILY AND
PARENTING chapter 1 pg3).