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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Correct my essay writting

In order to raise a well-adjusted chile, in my opinion, you should get to know few things and put it in mind when you attempt to raise a good child. First, get to know all you can about their personalities, strengths, weaknesses, likes and dislikes. Second, you should know that a child starts out only understanding through emotions. By giving a formidable emotional foundation of love, warmth, validation and security; a child who must be given discipline understands not to feel frightened, hated, erased or rejected. when a child is emotionally secure, he can accept messages of training and discipline. Third, you should get to know that what a child sees in his surroundings molds him, and it is important for parents to be good role models. Fourth, you should take into account the individuality of each child; childeren have different personalities, sensitivity levels, minds, strengths and limitations. Finally, you should know that when a child needs correction, speak to him softly and in accordance with his understanding.
  

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Spell check would have highlighted most of your issues. Proof read your own work before handing it on to others! The only major structural issue is the first sentence, which needs rewriting.

  • Spell check would have highlighted most of your issues.
  • Proof read your own work before handing it on to others!
  • The only major structural issue is the first sentence, which needs rewriting.
  • ' Formidable doesn't quite fit in the context you use it.
  • Do you mean assured?
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Spell check would have highlighted most of your issues. Proof read your own work before handing it on to others!

The only major structural issue is the first sentence, which needs rewriting. For instance: 'I belive that in order to raise a well-adjusted child, you should get to know a few things and keep them in mind when you attempt to raise a good child.'

Formidable doesn't q

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