Correct my essay thx..

Coming home from school one normal afternoon, I come to find out that my front door had an unusually large, broken hole on it. At the same time, a sudden squeaking noise comes from the above floor. I had a feeling in my mind that there is thievery committed in my household. As I walk in cautiously passing the broken door, and up the stairs, I stop at the appearance of the thief. He had told me he found the house in this broken state, but I unknowingly replied out of shock, that I was visiting a friend of mines. I hurriedly walked down the stairs, with him following me.

I felt regretful to my reputation for not having the momentary ability to stop such a despicable thief. I wanted to return the favor by attacking the thief, but what if he had some kind of weapon? That thought had caused me to not do anything further than letting him go. I then called my cousin, who happens to live right next to me. I had explained the whole incident to them and the police arrive soon after. I had to explain the entire incident over to the police. The policemen questioned me upon the thief's appearance and facial looks. I had realized that I already forgot the image of the face of the thief that stood no more than 6 feet away about 10 minutes ago. I was in the state of shock while I experienced thievery, which caused the sudden memorization.

Lucky the thief only robbed the $50 from my parent’s desk. Fortunately he didn’t search my parent’s closet other wise it will lose further more.




[it seem not much description.. and too plain..] thx