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Correct my essay please(Pollution topic)
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00 Nowadays, When human has a high level of living, our earth has exhausted of many kinds of pollution, especially is air pollution, -one of the largest polluted sources come from three causes: growing urbanisation, increasing number of vehicles and deforestation by using fire. In this essay, we will look at these three causes of air pollution problem. 02 br
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00 One of the main common causes of air pollution is an increase in urbanisation. A lot of people have moved from rural areas to urban areas because they want to look for better schools, hospital and services for themselves. As a result, the city population become overcrowded. Also, the level of air pollution increases in big cities. 02 br
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00 A second cause of air pollution is an increase in the number of vehicles. The cost of motorbikes is very cheap and quite afforable for most families. For example: it is quite common for each families to have 3 to 4 motorbikes in the family. As the number of vehicles increases, the levels of air pollution increase. 02 br
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00 A third major cause of air pollution is the clearing of forests using fire. In some countries where the population is booming people have to clear forests to make room for buildings, schools, hospitals and supermarkets. Using fire to clear forest is the cheapest available tool. As the result, the smoke which comes from fires, affects and pollutes our air quality. 02 br
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00 In conclusion, Air pollution ‘s from 3 sources: urban growth, an increase in the number of mortobikes and clearing forests using fire. It’s the time for our government and us should take actions to protect environemnt for us and our future generations. 0-
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00 Nowadays, When human has a high level of living, our earth has exhausted of many kinds of pollution, especially is air pollution, -one of the largest polluted sources come from three causes: growing urbanisation, increasing number of vehicles and deforestation by using fire. In this essay, we will look at these three causes of air pollution problem. 02 br
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00 One of the main common causes of air pollution is an increase in urbanisation. A lot of people have moved from rural areas to urban areas because they want to look for better schools, hospital and services for themselves. As a result, the city population become overcrowded. Also, the level of air pollution increases in big cities. 02 br
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00 A second cause of air pollution is an increase in the number of vehicles. The cost of motorbikes is very cheap and quite afforable for most families. For example: it is quite common for each families to have 3 to 4 motorbikes in the family. As the number of vehicles increases, the levels of air pollution increase. 02 br
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00 A third major cause of air pollution is the clearing of forests using fire. In some countries where the population is booming people have to clear forests to make room for buildings, schools, hospitals and supermarkets. Using fire to clear forest is the cheapest available tool. As the result, the smoke which comes from fires, affects and pollutes our air quality. 02 br
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00 In conclusion, Air pollution ‘s from 3 sources: urban growth, an increase in the number of mortobikes and clearing forests using fire. It’s the time for our government and us should take actions to protect environemnt for us and our future generations. 0-
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0 My take for 1st Para 02 br 02 br 00 Now, when the living standard of man is exceeding expectations, our planet has exhausted of many kinds of pollution. The earth is bearing the brunt of our developments. Air Pollution is one of the major causes for the same, its three sources are growing urbanisation, increasing number of vehicle and deforestation due to fire.
- 0 My take for 1st Para 02 br 02 br 00 Now, when the living standard of man is exceeding expectations, our planet has exhausted of many kinds of pollution.
- The earth is bearing the brunt of our developments.
- Air Pollution is one of the major causes for the same, its three sources are growing urbanisation, increasing number of vehicle and deforestation due to fire.
- We will elaborate on these three sources in this essay.
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0 My take for 1st Para 02 br
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00 Now, when the living standard of man is exceeding expectations, our planet has exhausted of many kinds of pollution. The earth is bearing the brunt of our developments. Air Pollution is one of the major causes for the same, its three sources are growing urbanisation, increasing number of vehicle and deforestation due to fire. We will elaborat
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00 Now, when the living standard of man is exceeding expectations, our planet has exhausted of many kinds of pollution. The earth is bearing the brunt of our developments. Air Pollution is one of the major causes for the same, its three sources are growing urbanisation, increasing number of vehicle and deforestation due to fire. We will elaborat
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0 Oh, ur 1st paragraph is delicious^^. It's better than mine. Thanks a lot. So, how 're other paragraph?. I feel a bit difficult to say more in the conclusion paragraph. Any idea to say more to impress someone at the last paragraph?Help me, please. I appreciate your effort helps.^^ 0-
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0 I will try my best to revert you back at earliest, as i am pre-occupied with lots of stuff. 0-
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0 Hic, No one correct this essay for a long time. I really need it fixed so please help me to correct other paragraphs 0-
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about polution is an amazing topic....and here the word formation and sentence formation is very nice....these kind of essays are useful for JAM program,in group disscussions,etc.....thanq very much
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Pollution
People have long used the sea as a dump for our wastes. Most of the pollution dumped into the ocean comes from human activities on land. Marine pollution is defined as the introduction into the ocean by humans of substance or energy that changes the quality of the water or affects the physical, chemical, or biological environment.
There are different types o
People have long used the sea as a dump for our wastes. Most of the pollution dumped into the ocean comes from human activities on land. Marine pollution is defined as the introduction into the ocean by humans of substance or energy that changes the quality of the water or affects the physical, chemical, or biological environment.
There are different types o
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hi friends this is satish please correct my formation
hi ever one my name is satish i am from Hyderabad
i want to talk about most happiest day in my life
since it was in the year 2011 on may 20 it was my birthday few months before that i uses to ask my father to get me a bike he said complete you are b.tech after that we will see on my birthday i woke up normally and i went out
hi ever one my name is satish i am from Hyderabad
i want to talk about most happiest day in my life
since it was in the year 2011 on may 20 it was my birthday few months before that i uses to ask my father to get me a bike he said complete you are b.tech after that we will see on my birthday i woke up normally and i went out
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i want to talk about my most happiest dy of my life . complete your btech .it was my most happiest day of my life .. after that i wil
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