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Maryjane30 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Correct my essay

I like cookies. I like cookies because they are yummy. My favorite type of cookie is chocolate chip. I also like oreos. I like to drop my oreo in a cup of milk then pull it out as soon as possible. I aslo like to take the tops off and the stick theoreo together. I also like peanut butter cookies. Sometimes we make them with hershey kisses in the middle, Right now I would like to make gingerbread men. I would like to make one of them look like a ninja. That is all I have to write about cookies
  

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Hello, maryjane. Welcome to English Forums. Could you tell me a little about what kind of class this essay is for?

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  • Your grammar is pretty good, but you have made a couple of careless spelling mistakes.
  • The main problem is that the essay is rather silly.
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Hello, maryjane. Welcome to English Forums. Could you tell me a little about what kind of class this essay is for? Your grammar is pretty good, but you have made a couple of careless spelling mistakes. The main problem is that the essay is rather silly. Who cares about cookies? How about writing about a topic with a little more depth?
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