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when people live in a city they think that they will be comfort and have no problems but living in it has many disadventages. In the city there is
pollution,pollution of enveronment pollution from cars motobikes.Cities are very crowded, everywhere there are crowds: on the pavements and in the buses.
Moreover,the other disadvantage is the safety in a city, but actually the lack of safety ,there is a lots of crime ,burglares,and accident.on the other hand
expensive living costs (renting, buying),People are not friendly , Lots of people so it's hard to be by yourself and Your neighbors may be able to hear
everything you say or do
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pollution,pollution of enveronment pollution from cars motobikes.Cities are very crowded, everywhere there are crowds: on the pavements and in the buses.
Moreover,the other disadvantage is the safety in a city, but actually the lack of safety ,there is a lots of crime ,burglares,and accident.on the other hand
expensive living costs (renting, buying),People are not friendly , Lots of people so it's hard to be by yourself and Your neighbors may be able to hear
everything you say or do
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Capitalize the first word in each sentence. Leave a space after commas and periods. Try to keep your sentences simple, and avoid having a bunch of ideas together in a sentence, separated only by commas.
- Capitalize the first word in each sentence.
- Leave a space after commas and periods.
- Try to keep your sentences simple, and avoid having a bunch of ideas together in a sentence, separated only by commas.
- when people live in a city they think that they will be comfort and have no problems but living in it has many disadventages.
- Cities are very crowded , everywhere there are crowds: on the pavements and in the buses .
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Capitalize the first word in each sentence. Leave a space after commas and periods.
Try to keep your sentences simple, and avoid having a bunch of ideas together in a sentence, separated only by commas.
when people live in a city they think that they will be comfort and have no problems but living in it has many disadventages. In the city there is
pollution,poll
Try to keep your sentences simple, and avoid having a bunch of ideas together in a sentence, separated only by commas.
when people live in a city they think that they will be comfort and have no problems but living in it has many disadventages. In the city there is
pollution
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