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Esewhite Posted 8 years ago
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Correct my errors please

Dear Ms Patty

Many thanks for your time and your kind assistance.

Following the discussion with my brother, when he visited last month, he was told that with substantial working experience as an accountant, I may not require the GMAT to gain admission in master's degree into the Robert Smith Business school.

Base on this regard, I attached those documents along with the email, so you can advice me if I should go ahead with the application.

Thanks once again for your assistance

Your sincerely

Ese

  

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Esewhite Ms Patty Do not use Mr/Mrs/Ms with first names; use it with family names only: Ms Smith. Thanks once again for your assistance Your sincerelyEse Dear Ms [surname] Thank you very much for your time and your kind assistance. In the discussion with my brother when he visited last month, he was told that with substantial work experience as an accountant, I may not require the GMAT to gain admission to the master's program at Robert Smith Business School.

— Mister Micawber

  • Esewhite Ms Patty Do not use Mr/Mrs/Ms with first names; use it with family names only: Ms Smith.
  • Thanks once again for your assistance Your sincerelyEse Dear Ms [surname] Thank you very much for your time and your kind assistance.
  • In the discussion with my brother when he visited last month, he was told that with substantial work experience as an accountant, I may not require the GMAT to gain admission to the master's program at Robert Smith Business School.
  • Therefore, I have attached my experience documents.
  • Can you advise me if I should go ahead with the application?
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Esewhite Ms Patty

Do not use Mr/Mrs/Ms with first names; use it with family names only: Ms Smith.

EsewhiteDear Ms PattyMany thanks for your time and your kind assistance.Following the discussion with my brother, when he visited last month, he was told that with substantial working experience as an accountant, I may
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