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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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Just advised fm customer that shipment of (item no. ) were 20pcs missed. Please double check with factory and confirm us by return. Should there were shortage cargo, we are request to deduct the charges from your invoice. pls. note
  

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I hope I understand your intent. Here are my suggestions:

Our customer has informed us that there were 20 pieces missing from the shipment of [item no. ...] Please double-check the order with the factory (manufacturer?) and send us a confirmation. If you can verify the cargo shortage, we request that you deduct the charges [for the 20 pieces?] from your inv

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