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Sweety_anir Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

correct my english

Hi Tiju

how are you today? i am going to meet richard and varun by 2pm. we will have discussion about spiritualuity. i hope we will have great fun ourselves. but we really miss you to be with us at that time. dont worry. we will be in mysore tomorrow. so that we will have load of enjoyment with you! so cheers. there we are planning to help deafies in the college in case they desire to have hope their lifes. now i am in hurry to go now. will see you soon.

love

anirban
  

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Hi Sweety-- welcome to English Forums. Hi Tiju, How are you today? I am going to meet Richard and Varun by 2 pm.

  • Hi Sweety-- welcome to English Forums.
  • Hi Tiju, How are you today?
  • I am going to meet Richard and Varun by 2 pm.
  • We will have a discussion about spirituality.
  • I hope we will have great fun ourselves, but we'll really miss your being with us at that time.
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Hi Sweety-- welcome to English Forums.



Hi Tiju,

How are you today? I am going to meet Richard and Varun by 2 pm. We will have a discussion about spirituality. I hope we will have great fun ourselves, but we'll really miss your being with us at that time. Don't worry-- we will be in Mysore tomorrow, so that we will have loads of enjoyment with you! So,
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I don't mean to be picky, but shouldn't it be "lives," not "lifes?"
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Not picky at all-- good eye, Anon. 'Lives' it is.
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Hi my beloved Priya sister

How are you today? I feel missing you a lot when you are without mobile. sometimes i want to text you but as soon as i realized you are still in hostel. i cant be patient till weekend. i feel that few days are too long. i wish that i could come to your hostel to see if you are fine. Can you suppose Queenie and i come there to meet you? i would
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Hi my beloved sister Priya,

How are you today? I miss you a lot when you are without a mobile. sometimes I want to text you, but then I realize you are still in the hostel. I can't be patient till the weekend. I feel that the few days till then are too long. I wish that I could come to your hostel to see if you are fine. Do you suppose Queenie and I can come ther
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Hi Aviral brother,
How are you? I am sorry for being late. i dont have a computer in my home. so its not easy to check my mail often. i have to get cyber weekly. any way i am very glad that you think about spirituality. why its important to receive spiritual food. Jehovah *** already made arrangements to restore the paradise lost by adam. But *** wants our lifes change into perfect which
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Please proofread and capitalize as I advised you in my last post, Anirban.

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okay go and have a nice meet wuth your frend richard and you know i want to text for me every day because i want i know what hapend with you please dont forget me see you soon bye bye

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