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Shravanmm Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Correct my email please.

Hi teachers,

I am writing an email to a spoken english classes institute regarding the fee structure and to which level of course to join please do correct it, if there are any mistakes in the format or the way I have written.

Dear sir/madam,

I am Shravan and I want to join for spoken english classes but I am really confused which level I should join for, I took an advanced level test on xxxx.com. And I scored 9 out of 10, I actually want to have a good telephonic conversation and I should speak well on topics, I want to get into international call centers but I am getting rejected in the telephonic round of interview because I am not able to speak well on topics, I am not bad at grammar but I am not able to deliver a good speech, I have a very little MTI problem. So can you please tell me which level of course I should join for and how much is the fees and is there any discount if I join immediately. Please do reply me the fees structure along with the course contents and which is the best course to me.

Thank you,

Regards,

Shravan.

Please correct my above email and if there are any suggestions please do tell me.
  

Top answer

It is very important that the institute see your real level of English ability. Therefore, you should send the letter as you have written it above, without any corrections by anyone else. Otherwise, you will enter at the wrong level and fail the program.

  • It is very important that the institute see your real level of English ability.
  • Therefore, you should send the letter as you have written it above, without any corrections by anyone else.
  • Otherwise, you will enter at the wrong level and fail the program.
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It is very important that the institute see your real level of English ability. Therefore, you should send the letter as you have written it above, without any corrections by anyone else. Otherwise, you will enter at the wrong level and fail the program.
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Thank you for replying to my post.

I am not going to any institute to take spoken english classes.I just chose this as topic and wrote a letter to improve my english. So please correct my email and give me your suggestions please.

Thank you,

Shravan.

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