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Selva Bloom Posted 11 years ago
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correct my blog

Hi friends,

I trying to write blogs. i had write 2 paragraph please check it and rectify me.

"Place ads in certain websites it as biding for plots in popular areas, its might started from 30 Rs eventually, increased 300 rs for get the little bit space. Meanwhile, Have to increase ROI instead of biding. have we increase ROI as long as?. I discovered few staff, in the case important is way of measurement, a deep measurement give you way to find potential customer to show the ads we made.

Sorts of websites doing ads service such as adwords, bing and recently reveals yahoo gemini. Lot of website doing same but not popular as major service provider. Return on investment(ROI) is major part in the marketing and client will ask also that. ROI means Campaign result. end of the day ROI will tell what we done . We have to measure in order to increase ROI. The measurement should not be basic method, would be high advantage method so that we can know the users behavior inch by inch to target them wherever they go. In adwords, measurement thereof remarketing helps to show the people relevant to the business. "
  

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Selva Bloom I 'm trying to write blogs. That's really great! However, your text is very difficult to understand.

  • Selva Bloom I 'm trying to write blogs.
  • That's really great!
  • However, your text is very difficult to understand.
  • You need to master basic sentence construction first before you move on to more advanced texts such as in blogs.
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Selva BloomI'm trying to write blogs.
That's really great! Emotion: smile

However, your text
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Thanks, can you understand what i was trying to say in blog?
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Selva BloomThanks, can you understand what i was trying to say in blog?
When referring to yourself, always write a capital letter I.
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Selva Bloomcan you understand what i was trying to say in blog?
Only something about rupees and return on investment. The rest is murky.

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