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Goldfish Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
correct my article or suggest alternatives,i dont want it to be so formal
Tehran is a huge culturally-diverse city with several articles containing sightseeing,art, restaurant, nightlife,… that deserves at least a few days of your itinerary.
Sight seeing
Milad telecommunication tower: the 12th tallest structure in the world that is visible from almost everywhere in Tehran. You have to see the spectacular overview of the city of Tehran with panoramic views of the majestic city in addition to The handicrafts and carpets and other wares on display. the high-tech fountains, the amazing views from the lift are a show case of Iranian pride.
Golestan Palace: the oldest historic monument in Tehran which was the Qajars' royal residence encloses about thirty showcases presenting almost everything related to Iran. This is a magnificent place with mirror walls, designed artefacts etc that makes it a must- visit place in Tehran.
Treasury of the National Jewels: the largest outstanding collection of jewels and precious stones in the world. The exquisite priceless jewels are absolutely astonishing that assuredly you haven’t seen anything like this. this is a must- see museum in Tehran where You can find a lot of impressive jewels,more importantly the most word-famous diamond called "kooh-e-noor"on display.
Sight seeing
Milad telecommunication tower: the 12th tallest structure in the world that is visible from almost everywhere in Tehran. You have to see the spectacular overview of the city of Tehran with panoramic views of the majestic city in addition to The handicrafts and carpets and other wares on display. the high-tech fountains, the amazing views from the lift are a show case of Iranian pride.
Golestan Palace: the oldest historic monument in Tehran which was the Qajars' royal residence encloses about thirty showcases presenting almost everything related to Iran. This is a magnificent place with mirror walls, designed artefacts etc that makes it a must- visit place in Tehran.
Treasury of the National Jewels: the largest outstanding collection of jewels and precious stones in the world. The exquisite priceless jewels are absolutely astonishing that assuredly you haven’t seen anything like this. this is a must- see museum in Tehran where You can find a lot of impressive jewels,more importantly the most word-famous diamond called "kooh-e-noor"on display.
Top answer
Tehran is a huge culturally-diverse city with several articles containing sightseeing,art, restaurant, nightlife and so forth (so on) that deserves at least a few days of your itinerary. You have to see the spectacular overview of the city of Tehran(redundant) with panoramic views of the majestic city in addition to The handicrafts and carpets and other wares on display. What are you trying to say here?
- Tehran is a huge culturally-diverse city with several articles containing sightseeing,art, restaurant, nightlife and so forth (so on) that deserves at least a few days of your itinerary.
- You have to see the spectacular overview of the city of Tehran(redundant) with panoramic views of the majestic city in addition to The handicrafts and carpets and other wares on display.
- What are you trying to say here?
- The orange bit doesn't make much sense.
- Are you trying to say come and see the tower and then also see the handicrafts?
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Tehran is a huge culturally-diverse city with several articles containing sightseeing,art, restaurant, nightlife and so forth (so on) that deserves at least a few days of your itinerary.
You have to see the spectacular overview of the city of Tehran(redundant) with pa
You have to see the spectacular overview of the city of Tehran(redundant) with pa
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